All Comments on 'Throne of Panties'

I never comment but this was utter cow shit

It seems like you had a lot of ideas that you were trying to incorporate in this story. Right now, it seems like they only clumsily fit together at best. I gave it a 3 because there were some erotic points to the story and I hope that another chapter or two might bring everything all together or at least give us a better idea of what point you are trying to get across here.

Please keep going.

Interesting story and pretty well written.. it kept my interest.... but please don't rush the ending ;) follow the theme... she should have found his panties sexy and sucked him then ben't over any get fucked hard... after the flight at her place she does dress him as a stewardess and have a hot time fucking and sucking..

I may have published the first part of Throne of Panties a little too early. It doesn't end with Fred on the floor of the plane.

There is a lot more in store for him...

Please stay tuned.

Certainly a different start...I'm looking forward to more of this one.