All Comments on 'Through My Son's Telescope Ch. 01'

Try actually writing a story before you bother to upload. This is a sex story site not a preamble to a sex story site. No one here is really interest in art they just want to jerk off.

What a fun story! It promises to be VERY interesting as it progresses. Only minor typos distracted from a nearly perfect submittal, hence the four stars rather than five. Next submittal, please - and keep them coming.

awesome.... looking forward to the other chapters.

You are doing great and the promise for this story is fantastic with so many vanes to explore it will yield many an interesting story. From the boys individual feelings to the mothers explorations to the group. Looking forward to more. Thanks

Great start, slow build up which I like. Hope to see further continuation of this story line

Good story looking forward to the rest of it

Dull as ditchwater . Forget the boring preamble . Just get started !!!

The premise of the story is great. The execution is hit-and-miss so far (for example, why all those capital letters?) but I'd love to read more. You can always revise the writing afterward.

creative storyline look forward to more

Good start, please continue..

Nice build-up. Enjoyed this read. Thanks.

Moor please. Don't stop now

Great start. But no moor story I see

Chapter 2 is in the works.

Chapter 2 is in the works.

I like the story. Based on the age of the sons and assuming the mothers know their respective son, they may have a right to be concerned about the sexual wellbeing of their sons. I do find it a little strange that the mothers have no reservation about incest. These 3 women are the most self-assured that I have ever read about in an incest story.

Very intriguing

Love it. Plenty of scope for imagination.

Love the subliminal angle.

5 Stars