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Blackpaw29Blackpaw29over 2 years ago

Wow, erotic, hot, beautiful weaving of sensation and environment. Shared the protagonists surprise and delight in Billy being more than he seemed.

Well written, economic in its prose but conveys the sense of heat and sensualality, thankyou!

CollegeStud4FunCollegeStud4Fun5 months ago

Great story and love your style. Nicely done. You are very talented.

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I'm a writer and a reader living near Seattle. I love writing stories or role playing. My stories or role plays style tend to focus on the seduction and build-up to intimacy, not on the act itself (thought there is plenty of that as well). I'm always looking for a creative...