All Comments on 'Thunderstorm Awakening'

cucks get one star, next time use the tag

First story!

4

liked the innocence of the stories' MC, the wife, and the way you increased the passion as you wrote. Good story

Hottest thing I have read in a very long time. I hope there is a sequel

Well done Macman, great first outing! Keep writing!

My wife has a friend who likes to sleep over. The first night she wore a tank top and panties around. It was hot. It went from teasing, to touching, to kissing, to licking. Sandy now spends her nights over in our king sized bed with us on either side of her. I’m trying to convince them to have her move in full time.

4*, would have been 5* but some of the terms you used were a bit repetitive.

That was a hot tale. Thanks for writing!

Nicely done hope there will be another soon