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by ChristianL

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Tenses

This has possibilities but is spoilt by jumping between past and present tense. A proofreader would really help. Sorry to be a grammar pedant.

ChristianLChristianLalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Re: Tenses

Thanks for the feedback, I'll have to be more careful in the future.

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