by Maxart414
The build up was worth it - I rated the first parts kind of low (too slow) but this was AWESOME. Some of the best written porn I've ever seen on this site!
We want to join the Thursdy movie club!!
I've written, and read, a lot of stories on this site and have to say that this is the absolute best yet! Man, would I ever love to be friends with the couple who wrote this. And, I realize that all of this is probably simply fantasy..., but to have this fantasy they've got to be pretty damn cool folks!
So well written, such a great lead up, and so damn hot! Thank you, thank you, thank you for a really wonderful read! Can I bring my wife to the next bad movie night? :)
Rich
I like the way they set up everything. It seems like I'm more personally involved in the story. Maybe the word I'm looking for is 'novel' ----- Eton
Maxine - you are awesome -- please come out of retirement