All Comments on 'Ticks and Leeches'

Loved it! As I've had my wife check me for ticks many times, I know how that inspection can end up! lol Five stars and a favorite point!

I've been reading incest since 1974 and this is absolutely one of the best ever. So well written with a realistic story line.

Silly and ohh so hot!

Please continue, let her give him her ass. Let them both love Bonnie! And soon please.

story! Another five stars, Another fave! Thanks sunburycd!

Loved it!

Thanks for calling us leeches😊

With a slightly better command of grammar & syntax, this story would certainly be a 5! However, the lack of proper punctuation & spelling at times took away from the overall continuity, and thus, the overall enjoyment. Just needs a little quality editing.

Keep on bringing these stories though!

we are waiting for the next chapter "Bonnie's turn"

Great build up and story pacing. I, too, would enjoy the involvement of Bonnie, mom giving Dale her butt, and any other option you choose. Really a great story.

You're one of the best in this genre SunburyCD.....thanks for writing this, well built and good story!

Love how you started out slow and moved to the sex i agree chapter two get home live together and the sis finds out and slowly joins in

Title says it all. Bravo!

I loved the slow build and by the end I was sweating, it was so hot.

You write about my favorite subject. Don't change. Keep up the good work!

well written and sexy story!! thanks

Hope you are doing fine

I've noticed in quite a few of your brilliant stories that your 'mums' find themselves 'caught short' so giving her 'son' (and us the enthralled readers) pause for thought. It's a great hook. I love your stories. Regards from SouthLondon.

How are you doing? Hope everything is fine.

What a hot story. Loved the slow, back and forth buildup between mom and son. Checking for ticks was the start of a very erotic love fest that was very sexy and hot. I almost creamed my panties when Dale was pulling down his mother's panties to check for.... oh yea, ticks. That was so hot I had to go back and read it again. While reading, I was too busy with the content to worry about the punctuation, it was all good. Thanks for another five star story.

At my age, i typically need Viagra, i had a raging rod throughout this story, no little blue pills needed. 🥒🍾

This is a good one. Love your stories

Outstanding story, loved when it all started with the checking for ticks, so hot and sexy...........():\

Literotica suggested I read this story, so I did, again. It's been over two years ago that I first read it but I recognized it right away. Got to say it still gets me hard when Dell in pulling down his mother's panties to check her for ticks and leaches. You could always write a second chapter about their life together and how they handled his sister, if you're looking for more stories to write. Sorry I can't give it another five stars.

Love the story would love to see more parts to this and find out what Bonnie has to say or if she gets checked for ticks and leeches as well

Very hot!!!!!!

Funny how I keep coming, no pun intended, to this story again and again. I enjoy reading good Mother/Son incest stories, and this is one of the best I've read. It still had me hard when they were checking each other for ticks. That is one very hot scene. Look forward to reading it again in another year or so and have added it to my favorite list.