All Comments on 'Tied in a Hotel Room by My GF'

Good premise.

Terrible story.

Nothing erotic because it lacked needed details.

For example: Nothing about HOW he licked her pussy. No directions/instructions from her as to how to proceed. She does nothing to him while she's being eaten? Why? Plenty of opportunities to tease him, but not let him cum were missed.

One star.

This stories never make sense. Why did he give in? Threatening her with calling the police or just brute directing her to unlock u...so many things he could do. No reason to go along with that ince he isn't tied up anymore

Ignore Anonymous comments. I really enjoyed your story. Hoping for more!

It has potential. Hope to see what you do with a second chapter.

Good first story. Ignore the negative comment. Write what you enjoy

great start to this story. time shove a butt plug up his ass, then collar him then give him some more pay back all the times he fucked with you while you were tied up by him..

I do not like or read, or rate, any story that has chastity involved.

And what happens next?

Continue with their adventures.

I like the idea in this story. The Woman should always be in control. She has the pussy, She has the soft, smooth body, especially if She has great legs, and therefore DESERVES to be the alpha. I hope a follow-up shows Her husband becoming a full fledged sub and that She makes him keep that cage on. More detail will get you a 5-star rating!

I think the male needs to also accept a spanking. Perhaps some body hair removed especially before attaching nipple clamps. Anyway men give themselves away, you know from his erection that he a sub at heart.