by Mrsgnomie
I for one am looking forward to more. You’re other two stories have been amazing and you bring deeply to this site. Also, it’s a chapter. The chapter was boring (and I didn’t think so) not a story.
I loved your other stories and am super excited for this one! Nash seems like a great and genuine guy. Hope his story will have a happy ending although I have a feeling it won't be with Lee 🤔
I was a bit confused about the Knott brothers at first but I guess you renamed Nathan/Logan..
Great start to this story......love Nash, and hopefully his life will go on happily.....I am sure the build of their lives will be interesting.............
Yes; I Messed up on Logan’s name. I thought I changed it but clearly I missed it.
I definitely want to see where this story goes- I have a feeling it won’t be as perfect as implied. I do want to offer some feedback: as with your other stories, we’ve been introduced to at least a dozen characters so far- many of whom I assume aren’t integral to the plot. Perhaps less is more? It gets a bit confusing when there’s so many players. Nash is so well written, so don’t feel like every single side character needs the same write-up treatment.
I literally sqealed when i saw you hsd a new story, i read your other stories and they were amazing,!!!! I have some speculations about where this is going, why do i feel like lee is cheating with paul and that's why paul is being shitty to nash. I hope I'm wrong cuz i love their relationship right now.
I am intrigued, looking forward to finishing another series of yours. I think this kind of start is unique among the stories i have read on this site.