All Comments on 'Tight Black Dress'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent story

While this story could have used a more extensive introduction and buildup, and more character development, it is well-written, with an engaging plot. A sequel is certainly warranted.

auhound49auhound49over 3 years ago
Very nice story.

I loved the details of all the action. So few go into the details, the ambiance.

I personally would love it more if there was some pregnancy risk sex involved.

Perhaps a continuation where she forgets a pill? Preg risk can be so damn hot, especially if the possible results are not desired - a real adrenaline rush like extreme sports where there is a penalty for losing.

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