by NateStrong
While this story could have used a more extensive introduction and buildup, and more character development, it is well-written, with an engaging plot. A sequel is certainly warranted.
I loved the details of all the action. So few go into the details, the ambiance.
I personally would love it more if there was some pregnancy risk sex involved.
Perhaps a continuation where she forgets a pill? Preg risk can be so damn hot, especially if the possible results are not desired - a real adrenaline rush like extreme sports where there is a penalty for losing.