All Comments on 'Tight Fittin' Jeans Ch. 01'

by Tara Cox

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nyc1975nyc1975almost 4 years ago

C'mon, write longer chapters.

Smiffy69Smiffy69almost 4 years ago
Noooooo

Too short! I’m now just dying to know how it pans out......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
A country song in verse.

This is well written but still an old country song.

FadedIndianFadedIndianalmost 4 years ago
Moooorreeee

Can't you at least post more than a page, please! This is agonizing!!! (grin)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Damn

You packed quite a bit in one page.

tazz317tazz317almost 4 years ago
TARA,,,WHERE IS THE NEW STORY ABOUT JACK THE RIPPER..RSVP

then a novel about Sherlock, I know you have them in your style..TK U MLJ LV NV

calgarycamperscalgarycampersalmost 4 years ago
Well Done!

That got the imagination going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
imagine

You really know how to open the door. Can't wait.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
400 Hundred Years Ago

You have written a very good start to an interesting story in thi s section, but it appears that this story has a very rocky beginning for what was a one night stand between a young Marine and a country girl. Keep up the story, it has been interesting to this point

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
So, here we go again.

One page at a time to get us hooked into a story and then to be left hanging out in space....unfinished just like your last offering of "No Strings Attached."

While I thoroughly enjoy your writing and creativity, I really wish you wouldn't leave us hanging in the wind.

Finish a story!!!!

Tara CoxTara Coxalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Anon A-hole

I just finished one. Last week.

How about this, people? I stop sharing my shit for free if it ain't appreciated.

I so don't need this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Hello Tara

Don´t let the S...heads get you!!

Even I ´d like to read more than one page at time...just so the fun of reading your stuff could last a bit longer ;D ...I so love cliffhanger. Then I can run my imagination wild, how this will continue...only to see how wrong(or not) I was. hihi

So pweeeeseeee.....don´t stop posting your awesome Storys!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Patience is rewarded

Please don't listen to the impatient nags! Your stories are worth the wait. Thank you vir sharing them with us <3

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckalmost 4 years ago
Good stuff

I will be reading this one to the end. Very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Oh wow!

Is her husband finally using his underused quota of “decent human being”? I was wondering how things were going to improve for this poor woman. I‘m not expectIng Callie’s response to the new changes to go smoothly!

The vast majority of readers do appreciate the effort you put into your writing and quite frankly it’s humbling that people share their stories on this and similar sites. What might seem like a short chapter on here is wouldn’t be deemed out of place in a standard format book. I think a lot of people forget that.

Tess (UK)

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