All Comments on 'Time After Time Ch. 01-04'

Quite a different style of story for me. I like David and Joey yet for a lifetime of deep friendship they sure are moody with each other. You have so much going on in these chapters. It's not clear yet whether the moods are caused by the dark priest and imposed gay feelings on the boys, or natural.

Great start. Nice background, good characters, nice pace. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)