All Comments on 'Time and Again'

by Vaguewriter

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boatbummboatbummalmost 4 years ago
An Interesting Fantasy

Could this be Chapter 1 of a fun series starring Dave & Ella?

Thanks for posting here. An enjoyable little read.

Farm4Life62Farm4Life62almost 4 years ago
More

Continue please. I'm hooked.

rayironyrayironyover 3 years ago
Cute

Old components smoothly assembled.

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderover 3 years ago

You hit a sweet spot with this story. There is something about the magical dimension that makes more space for the wonder of sex, for the joy of discovery, and the very real magic that is sexual pleasure. Ella combines this wonderful sexual naivety with all the ancient wisdom and knowledge, while Dave is just so enthusiastic it's great.

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