All Comments on 'Time Heals No Wounds Ch. 01'

Did you have to do that? ... Such cruelty

MORE. MORE.

If this part of a larger project, I would love to read it. Great start.

Compelling start, definitely looking forward to more!

J

(A) I vote this a solid 5, and I rarely hand out fives.

(B) you drew me into the story immediately with compelling characters and a strong storyline. The dialog sounds natural (so hard to do), and the first-person view is well written. I enjoyed the excitement/Potency/Eternity concept and descriptions. All in all, well done.

(C) Arrrrg, a cliffhanger!! I look forward to additional stories in this world with great anticipation.