All Comments on 'Time Out at Christmas'

The timeout was only 20 minutes, not long enough for a brother and sister to randomly and blindly start fucking each other. There is no good reason for them to do this; they had almost nothing in common. Spread the story out longer and things might improve

One of the first stories I read here and still one of my favorites.

Love this, please continu!

Great story, be good to get Mum & Dad involved too ..........

Until I read the last paragraph! I still remember this from first time around so it's definitely good

Looking for the next chapter

Even if its 10 years old, loved it

Need more like this!

Good story and good flow. Some of it wasn't very realistic, but that's ok. It's an erotic story and not a Stephen King novel. I's curious as to a next chapter when they "fuck each other senseless." Merry Christmas.

Hot AF!

Give this sexy older brother a splash of sexy brown chest hair for his manly chest -- something else to turn Kylie on! Hope they get around to another round before they part company after the holidays!