All Comments on 'Time to Go!'

I'm amazed at the trash people leave on their phones!

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That was a different twist. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Lol, if she is dumb enough to talk to him after dumping him for cheating, then she is dumb enough to have no clue that the cheating ex knew an almost certain way to break her rebound engagement. ⭐⭐⭐⭐

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Ambushed. D

He should have thanked a lot more the guy with the mic...

gottca bitch

Most women think they are entitled, but just really skanks at heart

Straight from the videos you see on YouToob. There’s a bunch of them with the common thread that women are whores. I call them all the “Women Haters Club”!

Well, that is certainly one of the most unusual methods of discovery!

good thing he caught her and what a stupid woman . must be a liberal haha

Interesting start to a story wasted on the dumb 750 word nonsense.

Probably the most realistic story lately.

Bam! Hubby should give the interviewer and cameraman a medal! Nice one @Regguy69

Taken from real life, I’ve seen the video this was based on. Nice.

Interesting take, for a new vignette. Four stars.

JPB NOT BOB

Ohh I have seen this on social media and always wonder if it was real or a setup by actors.

A very rare event: one very short tale, but very well written and likable, belonging to the very few 1% of the LW tales not following the endless bombing fetish-cuck flow of irrealistic fantasies, with only sheep and ridiculous husbands. So, 5* for building a good tale in such short space, 5* for being an original one, and 5* for not being the usual femdom-fetish-cuck-raac tale: average rating, a full 5* ! Well done.

Cute and compact. Yet another technological own-goal. 5*

So true, so true. An un-named TV judge has said it many times say it forget it, write it regret it. The young people today are so used to cell phones that they say and post thing that they think can never hurt them. Nothing on the internet ever really goes away.

It's easy to understand that if she wanted one last time in his bed and was willing to accept his request for a goodbye romp, then her intended other was not her first choice and would cheat on him again when the first chance came.

Nicely done short - 4.4*

That was original! 5*****! I liked it!

If she'll cheat on a fiance, she'll cheat on a husband.

Cute -- short and sweet -- 5*

10 Big Blazing Stars. Whoa, a powerful 750 words. Very powerful. LOL just goes to show you that a story doesn't have to be 3K to be powerful. Great writing. thanks, Buster2U

Hard to tell a story in 750 words. One of the better efforts.

I agree hard to tell in 750 words. This definitely needs a longer rewrite of a continuation

This could have and possibly should have been a longer story. Still it was enjoyable and we can guess how it went after that. 4 stars

TRUST was busted as a fiancee`. Her texts are a clear indicator of her attitude towards fidelity and potential for any future temptations.

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He was SAVED by the mic from her destructive attitude.

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5***** Hooyah, Salutes... SAVED, wish the story had more

From fake tik tok to bad LW, the lifecycle is complete.

Someone has been watching youtube!. Love seeing those videos on there.

Great job. You hit all the targets. 5/5

Quick and fun, thanks!

The last line is very true

Yeah watched this on tic toc

Serves the stupid bitch right! She's again at least somewhat involved with her old bf who cheated on her while engaged to her fiance. Continuing the texts & not shutting him down, at least when they met in the coffee shop made the fiance lose the trust in her. 42 messages?!! That she agreed to fuck the ex 1 last time - & who knows how many other times, shows she's a cheat & untrustworthy. He's right to cut the engagement off then & there. Nothing more to say.

Of course, we don't read what it's all about or her using all the cliche phrases except the early "it doesn't mean anything". Pardon me but yes it does! 4 stars Bob

He dodged a bullet! Good tale.

Perfect 5

4*

You're right about talking to strangers with a mic. Anything for attention. Fodder for a good story and you captured it well.

The saddest video of this scenario I've seen is a couple that have been together for 40 years. The guy used the woman's phone to call a guy she claimed was a "friend." He answered, "What's up, babe?"

40 years down the drain.

I’ve seen these videos on YouTube. One of them will invariably hesitate to open their phone and will try to squirm out of doing so. 5/5 BRB

I’m glad he found out. Now, besides inflicting whatever pain he can imagine on the traitor, he needs to burn her enablers. A girl like that tells her friends, and possibly her family. There’s definitely other people who knew she was communicating with another man, and kept it secret from him. Plenty of grief to spread around!

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ZK

Great story!

This story needs expanded!

@Just_Words, "If she'll cheat on a fiance, she'll cheat on a husband." - Not necessarily. Being married is a much bigger commitment than being engaged.

I've seen these videos on YouTube. Usually on tinder I think. Hot girls wanting to be always pursued

I love this. It reminds me of a radio bit where the station calls someone with that person's significant other on the line muted. They tell the person they've won a romantic prize for 2 and all they need is the name of the person they want to share it with. A good percepercentage of the time, the significant other was not named. Talk about on air fireworks!! The bleep button got a real workout.

But back to this story, the gf probably won't care as she stated in her text to the ex, " The texts soon became her lament that he had cheated and ended something special". So she'll have the freedom to explore just how special things were with the cheater with no morals.

Bad is wasn't longer...

She was an alpha widow.

The guy was very smart to dump her immediately. No saving that one.

A real fun way to avoid being shackled into a life long sentence.

Original, clever and satisfying. All in 750 words. Impressive.

Adios slut

Nice…… perfect, short and to the point. Thanks for writing.

Ambush media is the worst. This was fun!

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Be well!

This was great. Imo you should have done a longer story because this premise is rather novel.

This could be a longer, more detailed story

WOW!! JUST WOW!! loved it. Short, sweet, (WELL, bittersweet) and hits home. I wonder how she explains this to her folks, never mind everyone else. Lucky guy. Dodged a bullet.

The BEAR

This is great as is. It doesn't need any more; but it could be fun to read a follow up. And you might enjoy the writing exercise.

Goodbye whore! Enjoy the rest of your life.

Did he put the guy up to it?

I wouldn't have any problems handing my husband my phone.. he answers my phone, he knows the password to it, hell he's the one that set it up.. I don't understand her risking her upcoming marriage to a guy she claimed is the best... for a guy who cheated on her😒. that is insane to me.. I don't understand the need to catch up and talk to an ex.. WTF for?😒.. what we got to talk about, a relationship that ended after he/she cheated?.. I'm being serious, WTF did they have to talk about?. The relationship ended when it did.. nothing's changed, what will talking do?. She had no business still communicating with her ex. She damn sure shouldn't of been meeting at a gotdamn place.. she knew she was doing something wrong, that's why she hid it from her fiance. She wouldn't of liked it if he was texting and setting up little secret meet ups with an ex. Don't do to people what you wouldn't want done to you. He dodged a nuclear BOMB.. not even married yet and she's already lying and cheating.. a broken engagement is better & cheaper than a divorce.. not gonna lie, I would've loved to hear her slut excuses

Who was the guy with the mike and why did he choose them?

Do the idiots complaining about story length realize this is a 750-word story?

She FAFO. He got out just in time.

Maybe this something we all should be doing, even after marriage?? ))

4 Stars from GW on this one . I hope her ass hits the curb soon . Good luck with Grant

Why do some readers want an extension of this type of story? Short, sweet and to the point.

This is a novel approach to the phone swap scenario. Don’t need anything further.

Not a story. Give us a story not some BS outline.

Lazy authors.

Sbrooks103x wrote: “@Just_Words, "If she'll cheat on a fiance, she'll cheat on a husband." - Not necessarily. Being married is a much bigger commitment than being engaged.”

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That’s just foolishness. Commitment is a BINARY word. Either someone is committed, or they aren’t. Either someone has honor, or they don’t.

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Man or woman, the type of person who means what they say doesn’t allow themselves to be attracted to others from the moment they are boyfriend/girlfriend until the relationship ends.

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And before the naysayers jump all over this, yes, you absolutely can choose who you allow yourself to be attracted to. Just the same as any human being can choose their emotions. We are not animals. We control ourselves. If you allow yourself to be controlled, then you are a slave!

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ZK

Even if too much short for a well written tale, it's always good to see a rare tale not following the huge cheating-cuck-raac femdom propaganda. 5 full stars well deserved.

More anti-cuck contributions, even though it's just 1% against 99%. Keep going.

A decent and likable tale using a rare husband with a male brain: in almost all of the LW tales we can only see ridiculous submissive sheep no-man husbands. Very good but too much short: 5 stars anyway.

After the uncountable "new" (???) LW authors pushing only the same unbelievable cuck-raac fantasies, it's always good to have one example of well written no-cuck tale coming from a well established author. Well done, 5* !

Enjoyable story for a quick read. I am surprised there are no "up-in-arms" complaints of "wrong category." As in, " where's the wife. "

I guess the moment she withdraws consent to look at her phone is the moment that “Mike man” was going to gaol.. I liked the idea but it could have been more subtle in application. After all, her wanting it back before him reading it, would be disturbing enough, though very hard to pull off mama 750 word story…

Five stars!! Smile, you’re on Candid Camera!

@Anonymous, Re: Commitment, FWIW, my wife agrees with me. There are degrees of commitment. If someone is in an exclusive dating relationship, and cheats, does that mean they'll cheat on their spouse? If nothing else, when you marry, you take a VOW of fidelity, that alone SHOULD make cheating less likely than when you're just engaged.

Better now than later. Good short story.

Cute story. Thanks for your writing.

Cute story. Thanks for your writing.

Nice idea, nicely executed, but vaguely unsatisfying. 3*

Well written flash story. Had everything that was needed.

Some women are just to stupid to marry, unfortunately some poor sap commits before he finds out she is a slut. At least this guy saved time and money dumping the cunt. Good riddance.

Hope her dad beats her ass for the deposits he is going to lose. If he is smart he will treat this almost marriage as a financial one and done. If his wife tries to get him to pay on the next one give her the choice of shut up or get out. Support a cheater and I won’t support you.

You should consider writing for the Lifeline tv series........more boring than a soap opera

It's very, very rare to find a LW tale with an husband/fiancee acting with a male brain. Almost all husbands in this cucking-wives category, behave like ridiculous submissive brainless sheeps. No need for a followup but a new lonhest tale will certainly be well received. Keep going down this path. 5 stars.

There is no loving fiance category on literotica. People need to stop putting their unrelated stories in this category ffs.

Stolen from Instagram, but decently done here.

@sbrooks103x For someone willing to cheat in a commited relationship before marriage, a vow means nothing. It takes a nasty cocktail of personality traits for someone to cheat in a commited relationship. That's why given the same opportunity, some do it while others do not. Those traits don't suddenly seize to exist when you put a ring on. They are there and given time and opportunity, they will come into play again.

Great story! Maybe a short follow-up where she finds out the interview was a set-up paid for by the old boyfriend. His coming back was just a pretense to see her, seduce her and set her up for this revenge for breaking up with him.

Short and sweet.

Very good story 5 stars from Xluckylee

Nice.

A pretty thin plot, but entertaining.

And a good idea.

4 out of 5 from me.

@sbrooks103x wrote: “@Anonymous, Re: Commitment, FWIW, my wife agrees with me. There are degrees of commitment. If someone is in an exclusive dating relationship, and cheats, does that mean they'll cheat on their spouse? If nothing else, when you marry, you take a VOW of fidelity, that alone SHOULD make cheating less likely than when you're just engaged.“

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While I’m glad that you and your wife think similarly, I’m disappointed that you both have such a poor sense of honor.

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If a man says to his girlfriend: “We’re exclusive.”, that should be enough. If standing in front of witnesses, and vowing exclusivity means more to him, then he is just a weak, pathetic little boy!

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Character id what you are in the dark.

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ZK

The number of videos I've seen of this is staggering

ALWAYS the women screaming to hide their phones, never the men

The editors agree that this category includes fiancées and girlfriends.

What kind of person would do this to a couple. I mean, who the fuck do they think they are? If this ever occurred in real life and people tuned in to see it, ..who am I kidding, It probably does exist in some form. What a fucked up world.

Rules to live by: (1) never, ever, snoop through loved one's personal stuff

(2) shove that camera up asshole's ass

Thanks for giving MC some self worth for a change.