Time to Go!

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Fiancee should have ignored the guy with the microphone.
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Jeanie and I had been together for nearly two years. She was wearing an engagement ring we had picked out together. She and her mother had most of the details of our wedding planned out, but today she wanted me to accompany her to the mall to check out a few things.

We had just exited the third store she wanted to visit and were approached by a young man with a microphone. Standing a couple of yards away was a guy holding an expensive-looking video camera.

"Excuse me, could I talk with you for a moment?" He extended the mike towards Jeanie and she stopped dead in her steps. She gave me a surprised look and then smiled and nodded at the guy.

I was about to tell him to bug off, but he quickly asked me if we were a couple. I nodded and Jeanie volunteered we were engaged and flashed her ring at the camera. The guy smiled and spoke into his mike.

"We are out here today talking to couples. You guys are engaged so can I assume you're happy with each other?"

"Oh yes! He is the best guy ever! I'm so lucky to have found such a wonderful man. I can't wait to become his wife." Jeanie's eyes sparkled as she spoke to the guy then turned to give me a loving smile.

"So, I assume you two are in love and trust each other completely?"

I nodded and said, "Of course we do. You can't marry someone you don't trust." I turned to Jeanie and she was nodding in agreement.

"Okay, let's put that to a test, shall we?" Without waiting for a response he quickly added, "Open your phones and then exchange them with each other."

I looked at Jeanie and shrugged, opened my phone, and extended it to her. She was punching some keys on her phone when the guy snatched it out of her hand.

"No cheating!" He laughed as he handed her phone to me. I looked at the screen, It was open to her text messages. I thought that was odd and just kind of looked at the guy with what must have been a quizzical look.

"Dude, open her text messages ..."

"Hey! Those are private! ... Honey, give me back my phone," Jeanie yelled and grabbed at the phone. I held it away from her.

"Okay, here we go," the guy said as his cameraman moved closer to me.

Jeanie was frantic as she snatched at the phone. Her behavior was way out of her norm. I hit "Edit" and then "Show recently Deleted" and saw "Grant 42 messages 19 days." I hit "recover" and opened the messages she had just deleted.

"Please baby, it's nothing, please, just give me my phone," Jeanie pleaded, still trying to grab her phone from my hand.

"STOP!" I yelled at her and she shrank back. I was pissed because Grant is her old boyfriend. She dumped him when she caught him cheating. They had been split about 8 months when a mutual friend introduced me to Jeanie. Now, more than two years later, she was exchanging texts with him and had been for nearly three weeks!

The guy with the mike asked me if it was bad. His camera guy stooped down to capture my face as I read the text. They started innocent enough with Grant saying he'd heard she was engaged and he was happy for her. She told him she was very happy and looking forward to her wedding.

A few days later, he texted that he wanted to talk with her and asked she meet him for coffee at Starbucks. She agreed. Had that been the end of it, I would have been pissed, but maybe could have understood her meeting with the guy to reiterate things were over and she didn't want to be involved with him. But, it wasn't. The texts soon became her lament that he had cheated and ended something special.

Of course, the asshat read her correctly and asked her for a final goodbye. He swore he would leave her alone once she was married, but he just had to have her in his bed one last time. She agreed.

The date for their rendezvous was three days away. I handed her the phone and pulled my ring from her hand, as she screamed and begged. The camera guy got it all. I looked into the camera and said, "Time to Go!"

******

It always amazes me what people will do and share with complete strangers who happen to be holding a microphone.

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StruckwrongStruckwrongabout 1 month ago

Thanks for giving MC some self worth for a change.

fredbrownfredbrownabout 1 month ago

Rules to live by: (1) never, ever, snoop through loved one's personal stuff

(2) shove that camera up asshole's ass

SarahwithloveSarahwithloveabout 1 month ago

What kind of person would do this to a couple. I mean, who the fuck do they think they are? If this ever occurred in real life and people tuned in to see it, ..who am I kidding, It probably does exist in some form. What a fucked up world.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

The editors agree that this category includes fiancées and girlfriends.

James G 5James G 5about 2 months ago

The number of videos I've seen of this is staggering

ALWAYS the women screaming to hide their phones, never the men

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

@sbrooks103x wrote: “@Anonymous, Re: Commitment, FWIW, my wife agrees with me. There are degrees of commitment. If someone is in an exclusive dating relationship, and cheats, does that mean they'll cheat on their spouse? If nothing else, when you marry, you take a VOW of fidelity, that alone SHOULD make cheating less likely than when you're just engaged.“

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While I’m glad that you and your wife think similarly, I’m disappointed that you both have such a poor sense of honor.

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If a man says to his girlfriend: “We’re exclusive.”, that should be enough. If standing in front of witnesses, and vowing exclusivity means more to him, then he is just a weak, pathetic little boy!

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Character id what you are in the dark.

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ZK

SomeOneTwoThreeSomeOneTwoThreeabout 2 months ago

Nice.

A pretty thin plot, but entertaining.

And a good idea.

4 out of 5 from me.

XluckyleeXluckylee2 months ago

Very good story 5 stars from Xluckylee

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Short and sweet.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Great story! Maybe a short follow-up where she finds out the interview was a set-up paid for by the old boyfriend. His coming back was just a pretense to see her, seduce her and set her up for this revenge for breaking up with him.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

@sbrooks103x For someone willing to cheat in a commited relationship before marriage, a vow means nothing. It takes a nasty cocktail of personality traits for someone to cheat in a commited relationship. That's why given the same opportunity, some do it while others do not. Those traits don't suddenly seize to exist when you put a ring on. They are there and given time and opportunity, they will come into play again.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Stolen from Instagram, but decently done here.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

There is no loving fiance category on literotica. People need to stop putting their unrelated stories in this category ffs.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

It's very, very rare to find a LW tale with an husband/fiancee acting with a male brain. Almost all husbands in this cucking-wives category, behave like ridiculous submissive brainless sheeps. No need for a followup but a new lonhest tale will certainly be well received. Keep going down this path. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

You should consider writing for the Lifeline tv series........more boring than a soap opera

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Some women are just to stupid to marry, unfortunately some poor sap commits before he finds out she is a slut. At least this guy saved time and money dumping the cunt. Good riddance.

Hope her dad beats her ass for the deposits he is going to lose. If he is smart he will treat this almost marriage as a financial one and done. If his wife tries to get him to pay on the next one give her the choice of shut up or get out. Support a cheater and I won’t support you.

JoeBetterBNiceJoeBetterBNice2 months ago

Well written flash story. Had everything that was needed.

robinhodrobinhod2 months ago

Nice idea, nicely executed, but vaguely unsatisfying. 3*

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