All Comments on 'Timelines'

My 2 cents

I wasn't sure if i would complete this story, but you kept my interest. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I hate time travel movies but this is well written and I enjoyed it.

I could see this being expanded a ton, but a great short story!

So much potential to expand this. Great concept and story.

I would love a little more.

I appreciate that the context of your stories covers enough to make them feel somewhat substantial. Also, they don’t take that long to read, which always seems unfortunate. I’m always left wanting more. Nonetheless, they are very good stories. 5