All Comments on 'Timestopper Begins Ch. 06'
by Drmaxc
- 7 Comments
Whackdoodleover 9 years agoAlthough, the idea that 20 guys would suddenly rape 4 girls who appeared out of nowhere instead of being surprised and trying to hide is a bit far fetched.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoIn the beginning of the second page of this chapter you describe Cindy with the/words, "her sweet hairy sex," but earlier in the story don't you also d so fine her as 'clean-shaven' down there? I'm just asking.
Drmaxcabout 9 years agoAuthorMy mistake. I think I added the paragraph whilst proof reading and forgot Cindy was portrayed as shaven. I'll correct the wording. Thanks for pointing out the inconsistency.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoYa think?? That was just STUPID!
Anonymousover 8 years agoA little fondling is nice, but to let those girls get raped is the sickest. They were children. Also, ejaculating in children, what if they get pregnant?
Drmaxcover 8 years agoAuthorPlease note the girls in this chapter are not children but, as explained in Chapter 05, they are 'certainly no little girls - just big girls eighteen to twenty-two' at the local teacher training college. I do not write scenes like this involving children. Max
AngelaSaxonover 5 years agoI for one liked the shower-switch scene! Could have gone on longer in my opinion...
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