All Comments on 'Tim's Temptation Ch. 03'

Wonderfully written. The joint authorship is delightful in that it clearly allows us to feel the emotions of both the male and the female and their desire to have their partners

experience the greatest pleasure -sort of a sexual "Gift of the Maji" with a happy conclusion and promises of delight not yet explored.

Definitly one of the top stories on the site. I really enjoyed each chapter and I hope there will be many more to come

another great story this was. and i hope more to come. of the same.

You must write the next chapter telling us how Tim and Cheryl enjoy each other. If the first few chapters were an indication, the final one will be nothing sort of sizzling hot and fantastic! Kudos on a job well done. And, a request to provide us with the rest of a great tale!

Last poster looks as if the author has stopped bloody irritating isnt it,thats why I prefer stand alone stories.And they complain we dont give enough feedback, is it any wonder.

Brilliant series of stories, but how I wished you'd gone that extra few yards and detailed Tim fucking his mother - now that's hot!

The sex was ok but where was the mom/son sex?? That was the whole point of the story! The author just left the reader hanging at the end.

Nothing compares with a boy fucking his own mother. As the saying goes, "a boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other!"