All Comments on 'Tim's Transforming Weekend Ch. 02'

This is a good story, but reading this chapter I get the impression that we missed something???? Mom being dominant? Fisting? Would have been nice if you had included that as part of the story?

But yes it would but better to have gone more into detail in the beginning. But I definitely can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

bit missing - many apologies - don't know how it happened, but the first half of the story is missing for some reason. Hope it can be fixed.

However it did gloss over some parts, and could have used more details. I would have liked to read about the night with Jean dominating and fisting Melanie rather than have the shortened version we got. It's almost like there's a page missing.

I forgot to check the date this story was posted, I hope there's a possibility that it will be continued.

5*

What a lucky young gurl, err boy? Either way he's finally gotten his share of cock and pussy.

It's never happened to me getting past first base getting to second base and there's a man already there /'