All Comments on 'Tiny but Fierce'

Not bad. Wonder what his wife Anne woulda thought? The guy started to mess with Molly at the party WAY too calmly. Sounds like he’s a regular cheater. Maybe because Anne is while on the road? Who knows? We don’t…the author gave us zero context 😎

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Well written. Kudos to first time contributor. 4 ****

I am constantly amazed about how my ratings often differ from the group's. I thought that this little tale was undervalued; I consider it a 5* story for originality if nothing else.

What's not to like, Maybe it ended too quick and we need Molly to live up to her promises about anything you want.

please continue the story.

Well done. Straight forward presentation of an extraordinary set of circumstances. Nothing left out, no excess. Engaging and well written. Thank you.

LWlurker

For a first story it was very good. I don't normally read stories that glorify cheating but this was well written and while cheating can never be justified this one is at least understandable. Between her medications and not communicating what she needed her husband Martin to do for her, I can see how she can justify it in her mind. The guy was just a scum ball that was more a user than a friend. What Joe really should do if he is a friend is help Molly with her problem and teach her husband, Martin how to really satisfy Molly and give her orgasms without ever letting Martin know that he knows from personal knowledge what will light her fires. To assume that Martin did not find his wife unattractive because of her small boobs, that would be stupid. I don't know of any man who aren't first attracted to there mate by looks unless they are blind, really, unable to see anything. No one first says that person has a wonderful mind let me look and see if she is beautiful. This story really needs a second chapter were Joe befriends Martin and tells him he has noticed certain signs in Molly that something is wrong and try to draw out of Martin the problem and explain how if it were he, he would go about correcting it. Taking Martin under his wing and explaining how to build her up, warm her up slowly and make her feel like the queen she is and the most important thing in his life. Or simply, listen to her needs and draw out what turns her on. Then act on those things or run the risk of loosing her. 4Stars

Two characterless cheaters who sooner or later go the same way as all cheaters - they get divorced. And the spouses will part with these pigs with pleasure.

Not a fan infidelity like this story, but it was well written with a logical progression I could see playing out in real life. For other readers, don't try to go down this rabbit hole in real life as it always ends in a marriage crashing and burning...5*

Hope they both lose there partners

@Dittybopper6989: "What's not to like?" Other than them both being cheating pieces of shit? Oh, I dunno. The fact she might end up preggo with another man's child and make matters even worse?

How sweet, a pair of cheating ass wipes. Wow thats a novel idea. Writing wasnt bad, subject was, I guess having the main character not be the cuck makes some happy but in the end it was a well disguised cuck story.

Needs a part 2 where the husband finds out what's happened. They are both young and would have improved on their own without a dirty old man stepping in.

Didn't see any hesitation from either cheater so the marriage is doomed from the start.

Well done! Please continue!

More please...an excellent start to what i hope is a long running series.

Surprisingly good and probably one of the most original loving wives stories I've read. Keep up the good work. It will keep me away from the sappy romance ones. Oh, I gave it 5*.

***Nice first ok sex an overall good read. Thanks for sharing.

True story? I would hope so. Lots of women feel as your character Molly did. I know as I have also experienced some of those "wives" thru the years.

@Anonymousabout

@Dittybopper6989: "What's not to like?" Other than them both being cheating pieces of shit? Oh, I dunno. The fact she might end up preggo with another man's child and make matters even worse?

She can't get preggo from a blowjob.

Great story! Additionally: it's weird to me that there's all these people complaining about the subject matter as if they aren't reading this story on an erotica site. Anyway, keep it up. 5/5 stars

Brought a smile to my face. Thanks. 5 stars.