All Comments on 'Tithe Ch. 01'

You have a very good start to your story, but when I just was really getting into the story.....

You ended the chapter, I hope you intend to make them longer with your next installments.

Good, fun beginning, but longer chapters.

Looking forward to the next one!

This is a good story, and I thought the length made it quite snappy. Stick to your guns!

Very good start! Chapters must be longer though. Can't wait for the rest!

sci fi my fave!

A great start, I'm definitely looking forward to reading more

Story please continue it

Ok this is a really good chapter. Even though it isn't very long it more than makes up for it in content.