All Comments on 'Titus Ch. 02'

Titus is as awesome as zdenek. Keep this one flowing too. Thanks

so far I have enjoyed all of your stories and hope that you'll keep writing

keep em all coming so far ive loved every chapter uve written for every story!

Nice chapter, it's nice to see that you addressed quite a few of my points from my previous comment (or maybe it's coincidence?)

I have to say that Titus is an interesting break from the usual characters outside of your stories, his concentration face is amusing and I can see the countless jokes and problems that will occur because of it.

I'm surprised that Titus did not ask Sarah to elaborate more on her knowledge of his previous task, such as whether or not she knew that they were up against overwhelming odds, we the readers know that she expected them all to die, so I'm surprised Titus wasn't curious about this. It would have been interesting to see her try to convince him to join them despite knowing that she had used him and the group from O.N as cannon fodder.

It's also nice to know how unique Titus is and hopefully we can get even more of an inkling as to how powerful he is compared to even the trained elite of N.N. Hopefully in the next chapter, we'll see Sarah's abilities as well since as of now we have no idea as to the true extent and direction of her powers.

Anyway nice chapter, I find this story as well as Badass the two best stories you have, though I still prefer more of Badass, haha.

they were pitted against combat masters and he kicked the guys ass without being touched, doesnt that give u an inkling of how strong he is compared to their trained elite?

There is no doubt that he's shown that Titus is damn strong, but there is a huge difference between attacking and defeating a person mid-rant as compared to fighting him when he's ready. I'm sure Titus would have defeated him either way but if you had read my comment, I said even more of an inkling as to the power disparity. If you get two people of roughly even strength, it's entirely possible for one to destroy the other should he get a good jump on the guy, as such, it's entirely possible for Titus to be only slightly more powerful and still do what he did, not that I'm saying that this is the case.

Titus and Sara are great characters. I can't wait to see what happens with them.

i enjoyed your story. keep it up and is titus the son of zen or somehow related to him? love your work and haha when can we read more or titus, xander and zdenak?

this is good story, kinda hilarious about him being lazy and all. but this keeps it interesting. cant wait for the next chapter, i hope he gets the girl next

keep it coming, i love youre story. cant wait to read chapter 3.

just fucking fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but at one point flow of story got interrupted at George view of titus otherwise just fucking fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and please keep it coming.

we all fans are waiting for next chapter and its long time since your last chapter.

Man im loving titus and cant wait for more thanks for such a riveting story cant wait for chapter 3

Keep it up... I'm sick and tired of all these 'flawed' and weak/reliant protagonists. You wouldn't fantasize about someone who gets outsmarted every step of the way, so why should fantasy writing reflect the most naive, annoying protagonists imaginable.

This is fun. Not sure why though. I know I thought the section lecturing about the worl and the source of powers was really awkward. There had to be abetted way to explain what everyone in that world would know but the readers wouldn't.

Also, Sara and Titus seem to interact rather oddly. Stilted almost.

But it is a lot of fun

you have succeeded in creating literature as addicting as heroin please continue, all of your stories!

Damn that's awesome! I can't wait for more.

I believe the title is self explanatory

UPDATE NOW!!! Thank you.

what everyone else says "UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF LITERACY".

Update for all that is holy and horny!!

You should really start updating your stories. Any of them. You start on one after another but never finish them. It's perfectly fine that you take a few chapters to develop your characters, in fact, it's awesome. But you have to go past character development for people to fully appreciate the whole story. Please update ASAP, thanks.

Update!!!!!!!!!

I think u have been copying this shit frm somewhere and now u dnt have access to it anymore. Fucking useless piece of shit

Well all I want is for you to Update this Story

And I believe this is your Original Work

Whoever said that he has copied it from somewhere get proof and then talk. just because someone hasn't updated doesn't mean that the story is copied

And even if it is copied you would be able to find the source easily

I think that this is another great story so far looking forward to you continuing it.

Unfortunately like other great story writers on here this guy after having some family problems has vanished I cry for these 3 epic stories that will go unfinished like other great stories on here

He just posted a new story in the Badass series hopefully there will be more soon. Great story can't wait for more

I've now read all the author's stories and now that he's back hopefully he will continue ALL his stories.

Hybrid and Badass thus one is just as awesome:) Hooked on your stories... Hope to see more from you soon... Hope life let's you get back here!!!!

Dionysus will be back eventually :) don't give up on their stories :)

Got a great start on something there. Still laughing at his concentration face...lol.

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