All Comments on 'TJ Ch. 14'

I find it difficult to remember all the characters and their relationships since it’s been so long since the last chapters. Also, this chapter had absolutely zero sex in it. It’s a great story but I hope the pace picks up please.

Pucks final monologue. How appropriate for TJ! Really enjoyed TJ breaking the fourth wall a few times. Always a pleasure to read a new chapter.

Good story and I hope there will be more. At times it is tough to keep track of the increasing character list. It seemed apparent this was written after a break. Not as impactful but Id still like to see more.