All Comments on 'TMA: Agent Moon Ch. 01'

I enjoyed it immensely. Great mix of action and sex. Just the way I like it!! I really hope you're working on the next chapter?

what else would you want from a science fiction story? Great start to what I'm hoping will be a long and interesting series.

Not my cup of tea but good none the less. Did you ever notice that people who write insulting comments never have the guts to sign their name. But what can you expect from someone from the east coast.

...and very hot. I bow to the master. Agent Kittridge

Slyc –

Oh man, that was good! You have such a wonderful imagination, and the man who does not age is a great twist. Loved it! Not sure who/how/why you got the troll, but think of it as a badge of honor. Someone is jealous of your talent. KEEP WRITING!!!

This is going to be an fun read-- fun ride...

A few very minor (really) quibbles, but nice twists and a hellava romp. I like the reference to the Kennedy story in the thread. Well done, Slyc!

A very interesting concept and story line. I will look forward to more chapters from you and any other authors that join. As good as this started, I suspect it will get even better.