All Comments on 'To be Enslaved'

Please go back to your games. But true be told your writing Skills are Impressive, just move on from the gaming world your in..

Great writing. Info dump all the information in the beginning don't actully world build. Have people shout in caps lock and have an accent impossible to read.

I don't comment often but this is good work. Defianatly a bit out of my comfort zone with the abuse but I shall judge when later chapter release

I liked it, but probably should be in the Noncon category.

I enjoyed this! Are you planning on making more? :)