All Comments on 'To Beat the Heat'

Sir or ma'am-

I don't know if you still check the comments on your literotica account (and it would probably be pretty reasonable if you didn't) but this story is the most tantalizing, well-written, and relatable erotic story I have ever read. Your use of language is perfect, you put words to the basic feelings that we experience and barely think about. This story reminds me of sneaking around with my girlfriend at the beach, and it's almost exactly what we did (minus the anal and the vibrator). I don't believe you've gotten enough good reception for this story. Maybe it's because the people visiting websites like this are naturally more attracted to weird kinky stuff, or maybe you didn't nail it on the SEO, or whatever it takes to "make it" on an online website for written pornography. But I want to encourage you to write more. I would buy a book of this. Hell, even if it wasn't porn. You're a magnificent writer, and to think you'd only write one story (that I know of) is preposterous. I want to encourage you to do more work, maybe on here or maybe somewhere else. Who knows, the world might see a best selling book with your name on it some day.