All Comments on 'To Have and To Hold Ch. 01'

Looking forward to more... might make an interesting story

Love it......seems to have great potential as a "slow burn" romance-looking forward to the subsequent chapters!

Off to a good start. Well written and entertaining. I await chapter 2

Thanks for stopping by and for your kind comments! Chapter 2 is pending for approval. Stay tuned :)

Palo alto is nowhere near LA.

Thank you, Xzy89c1, for the observation. It was a mistake on my part not updating the location to 'Downtown LA.' instead of 'Palo Alto'.

The story, originally, took place in San Francisco but I changed my mind as I kept writing. Thanks again.

I'm a sucker for these alpha male stories. Lovely way to start! Looking forward to chapter 2.

Fun little story, well written, with few grammatical errors, all of which makes it very readable. You’ve added a few good character descriptions and a theme which has not yet been overdone on Lit, and I think you have a winner. Thanks.

This story is off to a great start! Excited to dive in to this cute little tale :)

Very good start to what is feeling like a great story line. Looking forward to following 🥳