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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I think you really understand the concept of slow burner. I appreciate that Christopher and Alexandra are not on top of each other so quickly. Also, great writing, you have a good way with words. Looking forward to Chapter 7.

ArdieffArdieffabout 3 years ago

Very readable ;-) Another please - I am interested in how the main character develops.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Where is the next chapter very eager please

Niomi2921Niomi2921almost 3 years ago

The rule of thumb for story telling is making the audience care about your characters. You’ve done it. While there wasn’t any Alex/Chris moments, it seems like a natural flow in the time. Everything is in character. Onto the next chapter!

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