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Click here"Don't you see Rosy?" Doc asked calmly, "Another son would be heartbreaking, welcome but heartbreaking after loosing a daughter at birth the last time. But to loose another daughter, Jeddah must have feared for her husband's sanity. He took the death of Mitchell's twin so hard,"
"I wasn't born like something out of a fucking freak show! I was born normal! I just got turned into a fucking freak!" I yell in disbelief. Too much has happened today and I can't take it in, I can feel the panic rising - the need to run building.
"Rosy a simple blood test can clear this up. Potentially two brothers and a father to cross match against..." Doc tries talking to me.
"No! No! I am so out of here! I am not listening to any more of this shit!" I yell outraged.
"I'm sorry Rosy but we can't let you leave," Edwin says right behind me. I jerk my head around to look at him but it is too late as he engulfs me in his arms and lifts me from the floor, panic engulfs me and I lash out wildly with my feet. I hear him grunt with pain but he keeps his grip and I feel my legs being caught at the knees to try to minimise the damage I can do. I jerk my head back hard and see stars as it connects with his but his hold doesn't ease and I find myself jostled and face down as he falls into a seat on the lounge.
"Out of the way," I hear Doc say and try to look his way but all get is a quick glimpse of something held in his hand and I scream in fear realising I am about to be injected with some drug. It stings as it goes into my thigh and I try to jerk my leg away but someone heavy is either sitting on it or holding it down.
"No! No! Let me go! Let me go!" I yell as I struggle. Edwin grunts as I struggle, my elbows and heels must be finding targets as I try to get loose. My pulse roars in my ears and I snarl angrily and turn my head looking for some body part left within reach of my teeth. I feel my inner cat struggling within me wanting release, she leaps forward but is strangely restrained and she whines as she stands trembling unable to break free. A strange lethargy is starting to grow and I renew the intensity of my struggles but my strength is failing and I pause for a moment trying to gather my reserves.
"Doc?" Mitchell sounds concerned and I begin struggling again.
"We just got to wait another moment or two, this takes longer to work." Doc makes no sense as I pause once again to try to gather my energy. I fling my head back and blink dazedly as I try to focus on the ceiling, something is seriously wrong with me.
"Lay her down, she's just about out," Doc says quietly and I blink slowly, my eyes not wanting to stay open.
"She okay? Remember what happened last time," Mitchell sounds frantic now and I wonder why as my eyes sink closed against my wishes. I can hear everything but I can't move or speak, I hear someone sniff close to me and I try to recoil but my body refuses to co-operate.
"I can't believe she stood for you," Doc says in disbelief.
"It just happened," Micah sounds upset and I wonder what's bothering him.
"You fucking idiot Edwin! Why the hell did you have to grab her like that! You should have let me talk to her!" Mitchell yells angrily.
"See how hard she fought, it would have taken more than one stray to catch her unless she was in heat and her cat wanted a tom." Someone, I think Malcolm says.
I feel a slight pinch in the crook of my elbow and I can hear a strange rhythmic noise for a few seconds before it stops and something pushes hard into my arm. My body has this fabulous floating sensation and I can hear my heartbeat beneath my ear, is that where it's supposed to be? What's happening? Wasn't I running through the trees?
- COMMENTS
Anonymous11 months agoI wonder how that councelling would work. It's not as if she could explain what had happened to her without revealing that she was a werecat. Can you get therapy if 90% of what you say is just made up to make it sound as you have been abused by humans? Would Rose even be able to control herself enough to avoid shifting during a session?
Anonymousabout 7 years agoAbsolutely clueless a-holes.
Kynhalisalmost 10 years agoI am getting so fucking sick of them being controlling assholes. Gonna go back to wolves after this one, at least they have some fucking respect.
Anonymousover 11 years agoReally? You just stop one chapter with no real worning then all of a sudden she has lost the baby's and isn't with the pack? You need to spend more time putting the story together right. Remember the readers are not in your mind. You need to put the story together so we can fallow what you are trying to say.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoomg i love this serries and i love how you write it from michas view too. i hope that you finish the serries i cant wait to see what happens next
Anonymousabout 12 years agoOk, I'm going to do myself a favor and shut down now. Can't take anymore of this crap story. All the males are brain dead and too machismo for my liking.
GimletEdgeover 12 years agoThey allow the reader to get completely caught up in the story.
I also enjoy the taste of ranch life in Australia that this story and ETC provide. I'm only sorry knowing that I'm about to run out of chapters!
Thanks for sharing this labor of love.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI just started reading Enter the Cat by the same author which tells this story from Micah's point of view. What a difference it makes. I wish I had known that before leaving comments on this story.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI agree. It's hard for readers to relate to Micah because there are way too many characters in this story and too much time talking about Tawny's relationship and interactions with every character except Micah on rare occasion. It makes it hard for the reader to root for him. We barely know him at all. More time needs to and should have been spent on his character and making him better known to readers.
canndalmost 13 years agoI'm a little unclear. Who would be her brothers? I thought all the tom's were brothers, not that Mitchell had different parents. And who is the other tom who is related to her?
Why in the hell would they grab her like that? That's her fear so ingrained by the strays. Why would they do something like that when she was finally coming around?
Floribundaalmost 13 years agoand I think that can only be a good thing!
First time I've commented on this story, and I was, to be honest, very happy with the way you were writing it up until the rebellion of readers' comments on ch.4 or 5, can't remember which. During all that time, I personally had realised that Rosy was going through extreme trauma.
I was also happy with the way you started this chapter. It was very quickly obvious to me why you had started the chapter six months on in the story. Basically, to address all the previous negative comments that said that Rosy should be over her past and have had counselling! I personally felt glad that she had rid herself of some of her demons and was in a more happy place personally; I have no issue that we haven't read anything about it previously.
Re: Going back to the clan in this chapter:
I have no idea why - either she is feeling better and misses them; or she is related unknowingly and feels a pull; she is Micah's mate and can't keep away.
Personally, I don't have a preference. It is your story to write and I wish others would let you get on with it, rather than grumbling about things they don't like.
I also don't like the comments that Micah raped Rosy. I admit, I am struggling to understand his character, but she fully welcomed him in wolf form.
Am intrigued to see where this goes next. Sorry this was so long!
Flora
willerileyalmost 13 years agoPlease don't bring Jasper back just b/c someone liked him. If he was already part of your plotline, fine. Realize your own story & characters.
Don't get derailed.
Thanks for great novel.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agough! I so want to read more please post the next chpter soon I really loved it when you were posting them quickly now that we really into the story it is becoming frustrating for me to wait for th next chapter incase you left wondering that was me complimenting you on your writing skills :D
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoi am shock that Micah would do that to her... he knows she was raped and he basically took her too!!! he is so unworthy!!!
