All Comments on 'To Love a Stray'

by Mygypsy

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crlockecrlockealmost 13 years ago
Thank you

I appreciate the background knowledge of this character in reference to your origenal storyline. It explained a lot to me. I look forward to the interaction between characters. Keep up the good work as I anticipate reading more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Jasper??

Did I miss something in this story? Who is Jasper, how does she know him and where did he pop up from?? Cos I dont recall reading the name throughout either version.

DoctorWolfDoctorWolfalmost 13 years ago
DON'T STOP!

You have to keep going - seriously. This story is begging to be told. It's gritty and feral - I LOVE IT! I can see the sweet peeking out and it makes for such a neat dichotomy. More, more, more...please?

DoctorWolfDoctorWolfalmost 13 years ago
Dollars to doughnuts -

And that's a hell of a bet for fat chick - Jasper turned her. That's my guess. Just had to tell you I was thinking about your story long after I read it.

catman71catman71almost 13 years ago
INTERESTING

SEEMS LIKE THREE SEPARATE PLOTS ARE GOING TO CONVERGE, AND THERE STILL IS ANOTHER SHE CAT IN THE WIND, IS THERE NOT, HOPE TO SEE MORE SOON

DawnzoDawnzoalmost 13 years ago
Really glad to see you posting new stories!

You have been missed! Interesting story

WerewolfEnthusiastWerewolfEnthusiastalmost 13 years ago
good story i like her version of events

i really like the different aspects an different versions from the different characters thus far.

p.s for the other commenters there's only the one female stray which just happens to be tawny. i happen to agree with one of the comments that jasper could be the one who brutaly turned her when she was 12 it would seem the most logical.

pps cant wait to read more from you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I love this story

not trying to be demanding, but.......MORE more more!!!!!!!

canndcanndalmost 13 years ago

I like the story. It is rough material with the rape aspect. I also can't understand her unwillingness to trust a friend like Pete who clearly cares and wouldn't let her get hurt. Who is this Jasper and if she knew he could be around why go there? hmm. hope the guys show up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I dont like rape scenes

Even this is fiction so it is a well known fact that no cat will let a tom mount her if she is not in heat and as I understand it she is not there yet... See to it he gets punished or I will punish your otherwise nice story by not giving any stars.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I wanted to give readers a fore warning prior to reading this story. I wish I had known before I began so I wouldn't have become disappointed. This is a great story and has many unexpected twists and turns. The author has a lot of writing talent and is a good story teller but be prepared. If you are looking for a love story, romance, and eroticism there is very little in this story. There's not much written about the male lead or their relationship in much of the story. Do not let this discourage you from reading it though because it is a great story and you will be missing out. If you know that prior to reading, you won't be expecting it and will probably enjoy the story more and be less disappointed. The author has not yet finished the story so these elements may come in to play later in the the story but up until chapter 11 there really isn't much of that of thing there. Chapter 11 however seems to be hinting in going more in the that direction. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Follow up to my previous comment:

I just starter reading Enter the Cat by the same author which tells this story from Micah's point of view. What a difference it makes. I wish I had known that before leaving comments on this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
First time for everything

This is the first time I've read a non-human story in Literotica. I very much appreciate the way you have given the protagonist abilities that go along with being a werecat but also have spent time thinking (and writing) about how things are in the animal kingdom without the overlay of human sentiment/mores to "civilize" things. The mating scene was perfect - not romantic and I honestly think you captured what it must be to be a female animal that goes into heat - running from the male, but at the same time being caught by the male - even if she dislikes the male. So for that, I give it a five even though I'm usually not a fan of first person POV expressed in present indicative. Thank you for sharing with us!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

For those who may start this story this late. It's just a study in misery where Rose keeps getting abused, raped and betrayed. Then in the end she marry one of the abusers and they live happily ever after. Yeah, right.

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