by ArtForm
Still like this story and want more. and i am liking the whole hierarchy and would not mind if you gave a little bit more detail. thanks again for sharing. Mechmanas
this story keeps getting better-- i wonder if fiona is eian's mate? and did dominic almost die b/c sydney denied his claim? great chapter and i cant wait for the next one to post :)
I was waiting for an update on this story so I was really happy to see a new chapter up. I did wonder if Fiona would be awoken as a full grown vampire and I also wondered how long it would take Sydney to realise Dom was not cheating on her. Loved this chapter and now waiting for the next one. :)
To be honest the whole Fiona and Eian storyline reminds of Jacob and Bellas kid. Its kind of weird, but anyways thanks for posting another chapter.
Nothing else needs to be said, other than i can't wait for the next chapter.
This whole non-human genre is fairly new to me. I discovered it about 6 months ago. I really thought every story would be the same. You story is a wonderful example of just how different the story lines can be. I really love the way you are telling this story. Everything feels fresh and new. I don't get the feeling I've read this before as with some of the other story lines. So Thank You for sharing you story.
Have a Great Holiday and Much Success in the New Year
MizT
too convoluted and soap opera like for me. Everyone is acting like a teenager. The only one who should be acting like a child is Fiona.
I'm really starting to wonder about Fiona's and Eian's relationship. Oh yeah and I hope Sydney and Dominic's relationship would stabilize soon. They're so drama-mama. But I think that adds some fuel to their romance. =) By the way, hot sex scene. Can't wait for the next one!
Man i just LOVE this series and all the other storys and series at that , your its just brillancey at its highest.
Jorjiah xxx.