by squeeker78
Ethan cant possibly be so nieve as to think daddy would stay put!
Way too short. Please post longer chapters and a little quicker. Really like this story line. But can't wait for a HEA. :o)
Surely Eithen doesn't think River is just gonna *sit* there and do nothing, lol!?! The dream scene was very cool and I really liked seeing Raivyn's POV, too.
Love the story but the pace is killing me. This was a good chapter and I just wish Eithen would tell River already.
despite being short, this was one of the best chapters. The emotions running high, the whole dream sequence was great. I liked how you brought us to Raivyn's POV for a bit so we got more of an idea of who she is and that she's real. I wanted to see Eithan interact with pack too...to see the other side of him-the alpha side. The only thing I thought was that River wouldn't give up so easy and that he'd get mad at Eithan's high handed attitude. Unless he thinks he can follow him, I can't imagine him taking that, trust or not.
I really hope River finds out the secret soon. Maybe what Lonnie said will come to him? I also am wondering what is special about E's mom that she'd be in River's dreams. There has to be a good reason why she'd have been in dreams of a man she never met. Is she more than a wolf? She was human when her dad met him, right? I also wonder how Raivyn and River have this dream connection. Looking forward to finding out.
I love this story so much but you're killing me with the short chapters. It's only a matter of time before River puts it all together and finds out what Eithen is.