All Comments on 'To Rise Again Ch. 09'

I love this story so much but you're killing me with the short chapters. It's only a matter of time before River puts it all together and finds out what Eithen is.

despite being short, this was one of the best chapters. The emotions running high, the whole dream sequence was great. I liked how you brought us to Raivyn's POV for a bit so we got more of an idea of who she is and that she's real. I wanted to see Eithan interact with pack too...to see the other side of him-the alpha side. The only thing I thought was that River wouldn't give up so easy and that he'd get mad at Eithan's high handed attitude. Unless he thinks he can follow him, I can't imagine him taking that, trust or not.

I really hope River finds out the secret soon. Maybe what Lonnie said will come to him? I also am wondering what is special about E's mom that she'd be in River's dreams. There has to be a good reason why she'd have been in dreams of a man she never met. Is she more than a wolf? She was human when her dad met him, right? I also wonder how Raivyn and River have this dream connection. Looking forward to finding out.

Love the story but the pace is killing me. This was a good chapter and I just wish Eithen would tell River already.

Surely Eithen doesn't think River is just gonna *sit* there and do nothing, lol!?! The dream scene was very cool and I really liked seeing Raivyn's POV, too.

Way too short. Please post longer chapters and a little quicker. Really like this story line. But can't wait for a HEA. :o)

Can't decide which is which though. Well played.

Awesome story, can't wait for more!

Keep going! We need more!

Ethan cant possibly be so nieve as to think daddy would stay put!

got bored