by RejectReality
I agree with Kantarii this was a nice story that was enjoyable to read. This is one of my fantasies almost to a tee. Really liked it. Keep writing.
Very well written. Enjoyed from beginning to end. Not easy to achieve. Please continue with these types of stories. You have a unique gift
I hope to read more about Norm/Natalie.
Good pacing. And I liked that the story held the trajectory and did not blow up at the end into something else. (no pun intended)