All Comments on 'Toby's High School Harem Pt. 02'

Good story. I liked chapter 1 and I like this chapter. I hope to read chapter 3 soon maybe Toby has a 3same in chapter 3

Enjoying your work. I look forward to the forthcoming segment(s).

G

Melissa went from reluctant to into it with no real transition

Ho hum

Another dumb pulling hair. Guess I and friends were lucky. Never ran into BDSM women. Only thing some liked was LIGHT spanking! Pulling hair a BIG no no. No pain!

You continue to write very 🔥 hot narrative, well-developed, yet still lacking in the editing area! You gotta work on this, the stories are TOO GOOD to be left as they are!

Birth control issues...he is 'inexperienced', yet he tries to show concern for Felicia and Melissa, taking short on at least ASKING them about protection. Condoms...MEH!! At least he is working at it...Felicia has started on 'the pill', so that is moving in the right direction.

Is Toby going to turn into the "go-to-guy" for some of the other guys?? How many more will be added to his small 'harem'? We will see in Chapter 3...and I am looking forward to more from you in the future!

Five Stars...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠

Why did you write “…that long of a drive, ..” when “ that long a drive, …” was quite correct?

Thank you for a very interesting story. Keep on truckin’.