All Comments on 'Together'

Married sex -- very sweetly described and full of profoundly generous love! I like it a lot, but it could be more detailed, clearer as to the nature and depth of the couple's love.

in the realm of personal an intamate attraction this story told it extremely well so intensely describe when a cupple finally are together after years of struggle an pain an learn that the only thing in life that truely matters is at the end of along day the only person you want to be next when going to bed is the love of your life whether it be man or woman. an that is my opinion on that

yours truely

j.l.r.

Love the descriptions. More detail would be great. I am missing dialogue. To become reall people in my mind I need to hear them speak. Good, good feel, pace, and desire from long time lovers.