All Comments on 'Tom & Samantha Seduce Sara'

Another author who doesn't know the proper slang terms thus wrecking a story. Get with what grade school kids understand and that's "cum" is the slang for an orgasm/semen/etc. NOT 'come' as used in the story.

"Come" is perfectly acceptable and has a long history as sexual slang for "to reach sexual climax," with usage in print back to at least the seventeenth century. "Cum" is a more recent development. I prefer the use of "cum" to refer to semen and "come" for the verb to reach climax, but both are acceptable. What "wrecks" this story is that it is boring and unimaginative, not that the author says someone "comes."