All Comments on 'Tom my Brother In law Pt. 02'

More! The story ends too abruptly. I love the naturalness of their coupling. Hot sex too. Part 3?

Perfect place to end it so that every reader is dying for the next installment! Hailey is a great character. Kids are so honest.

Wasn't sure you were going to continue this story; really glad you did. These two guys seem like they were meant to be together. The sex is good and there's a real love connection. And the family aspect of this is great too. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story develops. Thanks, MLF

Chapters are too short. Keep this story going please.

Awesome story.... luv betweem two men and a sweet daughter making it more stronger. Dont we all like and tearn a life like this? love and family? I am liking this so much..so simple yet closer to heart.. no plots no conspiracys...relate to every person needs.

"Tom and I kissed he would pull back and look me in the eyes, I was not sure how he felt but I loved this man so very much."

You need an editor or try Grammarly...