by overthebow
very well written i hope to see more of this wonderful story
You captured very well the thrill of taking a lover into your ass... only a few writers of gay stores really get the bottom's emotional state of mind--yours was right on! You know exactly what it feels like to be fucked. (MrGoodBottom is another, by the way). Keep "filling us up" with your good work--more please!
Was fantastic, and it has A LOT of potential to go places??? Hint-Hint! Bi here, and loved it. Drag the girls in it too!
that was so hot. I loved every second. Thank you!! I cant wait to lose my cherry now!!!!
Totally hot! I am a woman but my favorite stories are of men losing their cherries. This one gets me off every time!