All Comments on 'Tom Prentice Ch. 04'

Enjoyed this part, but I would have thought that Tom would have used his mom's car instead of his pick-up, I hope it will not be to long befor the nex post

Have read the whole story at one go - I just had to. Superbly written, and no wham-bam-thank you mam. Just a superb story.

About 15 days from now I will be jumping up and down in antecipation of the posting of the next chapter! Very delicious romance! Of course going away to school usually breaks up young couples.. How sad!

Thanks for all the work Jake!

Only thing that seems off is that the kids speak as if they are middle aged.

Many ways this can develop, questions to answer!

Can't wait to read your next installment. Please continue soon.

Laney will cheat when she gets to college and Tom will wind up with her mother. Atleast that's where I see this going.