All Comments on 'Tommy, New House, & New Mom Ch. 01'

Good start; but to damn' short.

I hope that the son gets his cock into his mom soon. Since she is such a slut, it shouldn't be too hard for him to get her pussy.Even though the story is short, it's well written and very good. Thanks......Rich

Nice start. Looking forward to ensuing chapters and thanks.

writers are as dumb as they come.

There are too many spelling and grammar errors which is very jarring. Also the format makes it a hard read. More white space would help

There are too many spelling and grammar errors which is very jarring. Also the format makes it a hard read. More white space would help

When sentences are so poorly constructed with so many misspelled words as in this story, nothing makes a smidgen of sense.

What was the point of wasting your time? You clearly couldn't be bothered putting the effort in so why bother upload?

Enjoyed the beginning, now looking forward to the son taking care of his mom's sexual needs. Thanks

The scenario is great, and I'll enjoy reading more, but please try to improve the grammar, it sometimes really hurts to read this...

best regards

Didn't even get past the first few paragraphs it was so bad. The almost rape story line was just sick. And you need to work on the grammar.

I really like the premise of your story but, the chapters need to be longer. The build-up was too short and the sex rushed in its description. Please and thank you. :D