by TheTitLover
First off join the world community and use internationally accepted meanings and spellings for various words. Like:
mum = remain quiet/silent
mummy = dead boady for science study
Story was okay, your main characters seem a little naive to me or maybe a little two dimensional.
as to the previous commentro--get a clue there is no internationally accepted vocabulary for Enblish. Mum is a perfectly normal use name for mothers in both England and Austrailia. JimdinMn
just shut up. You're getting really boring and embarrassing yourself. Attacking Oz stories as well as UK ones now are we? I told you everyone says Mum except you navel-gazing N Americans. Live with it, just like we are expected to believe more people than Superman wear their pants on the outside.
Mate, pay no attention to the idiot bitching about "mum" or "mom" - this story's great!
More please!
Fantastic series. Keep up the great writing and don't pay attention to those that sniffle about spelling, when there's nothing to whine about. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter in this series.
great sequel to the first part ; hopefully the will be a new story with Tommy and his mother soon ; make sure that there is lots of titfucking and facials in it ; keep on writing
I really liked this story with mature women, big tits and titfucking! THX a lot!
Please continue this series! I really enjoy reading your stories and please ignore those 'Mum' haters! Loved your most recent stories too!
Really liked all the cum, the first load in her face was my favourite bit.
Great second chapter. I like how you main character is progressing as well as the interesting partners. Looking forward to the next installment.
I know you will never come back and read the many responses to your comments. I further understand that you posted as the ever popular anonymous so there is no way to contact you directly or ever get your attention as a means of communicating with you.
However, I am compelled to make the futile effort.
Universally accepted version of English? Therefore one, and only one, method of spelling, pronunciation, and usage? Your geocentric egotism is astonishing.
English originated in and is still the language of the land in - wait for it -
England. All subsequent variants that have come into usage are just that variations unique to their own locale. Some of those include, Canada, Australia, New Zealand, South Africa, even India and the United States fall into that category. And, regardless of which version you personally prefer, it must be acknowledged that there are as many differences as there are physically isolated countries.
And may I suggest, when calling someone out for the usage of the "mother tongue" you should first proof read your own posting.
"mummy = dead boady for science study"
Boady? really? are you familiar with a phrase using pot, kettle and black?
Superior to the first chapter, this second one continues this is an excellent and engaging drama. It has great characters and the plot is compelling from start to finish. The love scenes are icing on the cake. Five stars.
Gave it a good shot, but I've got to call it quits.
Should be called "Bimbo's on Parade"