All Comments on 'Tommy's Torment Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Fantastic continuation. Like Scheherazade, you write amazing cliffhangers. Can't wait for the next part. Keep him gagged too lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Such sweet torture!!! LOVE your writing .... you make me want to be Tommy !!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

These are very hot stories, hope you continue them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I hope Sheila never lets him cum. Or if she does, she introduces him to ruins. Please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The torment is exquisite however I would like the chapters to be a bit longer. It seems that we just get to a good part and then break away. I wonder just how long Tommy is going to last but I hope it is a very long time. Insanity is just a step away.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

These are fine but less developed and erotic than your debut here, "It Could Be Worse," which is among my favorites.

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