All Comments on 'Toni's Awakening Pt. 02'

by Shaima32

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stroudlestroudleover 6 years ago
Lovely back story

Wonderfully written. Its nice to get some back story on the main characters. I hope this means we will get a long series on Toni and Carina as i am enjoying this so much.

MaonaighMaonaighover 6 years ago
The only time...

...I'd send anyone a glass of schnapps is if they asked me to recommend a good paint-stripper. But... different strokes. Chapter well up to your usual standards, Shaima. Don't keep us waiting too long---I'm sure I speak for all when saying we want to know what happens next.

lespoon1lespoon1over 6 years ago
5+++

Another wonderful well-crafted story by one of my favorite authors. By the way, Maonaigh is another favorite.

stculpastculpaabout 6 years ago
I hope this is helpful

I liked the story. As someone who grew up in Germany, there are two things I'd like to point out: The woman's name should Charlotte, and you don't drink Schnapps from a glass. I is served in shot glasses. Please keep writing.....

okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

Sorry, after reading this, I was asking myself, "Who is Toni, again?" And, "Just whose awakening are we talking about?"

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