All Comments on 'Tonsiltown Tattletale Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Excellent story

Damn, the one description of the "liquid" getting ready to launch was great and fit in with the story in more ways than one!

bearleebearleealmost 19 years ago
Excellent story

Damn, the one description of the "liquid" getting ready to launch was great and fit in with the story in more ways than one!

bearleebearleealmost 19 years ago
bearlee-it's me LOL

Damn, I think I forgot to log in on the that PC I just made!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Impressive

You have to get the rest of the story out ASAP. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Tease

Great beginning, can't wait to read the next chapter.

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