All Comments on 'Tony Starts Retirement Ch. 02'

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Rwa4768Rwa4768over 3 years ago

Looks like Tony has lots to look forward to at the retirement community

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Suspense and deep plot. . .

"Hi Tony. How are you?" "Good." "Ok take off your pants." Sex was great. Done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Boring........

....repetition is all mechanical Tony-and we, have to look forward to here.

Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

I wonder if Tony is starting to feel like a stud service.

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

I like the idea but am finding that it could just dip into a comedy, I do hope not.

Still doing a good job on the character descriptions but maybe a little lacking in the sex details

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