All Comments on 'Tony Starts Retirement Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Read through 9 stories, which should really only be one, and get to 'to be continued' 10 months on - nothing. That a waste of space. Stories are simple; beginning, middle and end. If you can't master such a simple concept, don't bother.

The saddest bit is that what you did write was quite reasonable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Retirement

Tony could have joined married couples, as some might

Have problems with performing& get off seeing another man

Fucking their wife.

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