by frqtrdr
Read through 9 stories, which should really only be one, and get to 'to be continued' 10 months on - nothing. That a waste of space. Stories are simple; beginning, middle and end. If you can't master such a simple concept, don't bother.
The saddest bit is that what you did write was quite reasonable.
Tony could have joined married couples, as some might
Have problems with performing& get off seeing another man
Fucking their wife.