All Comments on 'Too Good To Be True Ch. 04'

It's interesting. Because it seems to naturally be moving away from blackmail, which is good because the blackmail seems to have nothing to do with the narrative anymore.

Well written and different.

You have to finish all 8 in the series. This is great writing and story telling.

Not a fan of the blackmail or the watersport aspects and I'm hoping you drop those moving forward...

Seems like they are heading towards a real relationship and both are learning more about their sexuality. Fun story and all the more so because I have no clue where the story is going! Thanks😊

He is being stupid here, he is on a winner here with her, but he is seriously close to fucking it all up.

Time to cement his future by seeing off the blackmailer and becoming her undoubted hero for life. He could marry her and inherit everything he wants and needs thru her wealth is he smart or is he serially stupid??

Read on and see.

Hmm if this keeps up it's just going to inevitably lead to a lot of heartbreak. Will she stick around after the reveal though? Curious to see how this will pan out. Yeah he could get rid of the blackmailer (various plausible reasons could be used) but I suspect the guilt would eat at him. Maybe a confession of truth and an apology with a grand gesture might work. Guess I'll find out soon enough.